Some people prefer to live in hot climates,whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that climates play a very important role in our lifestyle. Some people concur that living in hot climates has a good living experience. However, I quibble from them and propound that I prefer to enjoy my life in a cold climate.
Adequate evidences are obtainable to substantiate the concept of there are several benefits of living in a country with a cold climate. The top-notch concrete reason is that people’s skins will not be damaged by harsh X-ray from Sun. Another rationale which hauls me to a patron is that we can enjoy many snow sports activity like skiing which is being most popular in a country like Canada. The rearmost coherent factor to be considered which can not be neglected is that we can enjoy family and friends get together in cold pleasant weather. To uphold my notion, I would quote an instance of my friend who was suffered from Obesity. He had started doing walking exercise in cold weather early in the morning. He had to walk almost three months at 6:00 am in the morning and the result was surprising. He had reduced almost 5 kg in three months of span by regularly walking. Winter is the best time to do exercises and maintain fitness due to high energy levels. Thus, it would be perfect for most obese people to start jogging and lose bodyweight.
What is half full for some, may appear half empty to others. So the public, in general, tend to distinguish that hot weather has many advantages over cold weather which has multifarious reasons. To commence with, some people deem that cost for buying clothes of people in warm countries is cheaper than in countries that have a cold climate. Withal they also uphold that one can spend his weekend time for many outdoor activities like sunbathing on the beaches with siblings.
In recapitulation, I reiterate that each weather has different advantages that affect to a lifestyle of people all over the world. Consequently, I firmly agree with the given statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun snow seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much snow', 'a good deal of snow'.
Suggestion: much snow; a good deal of snow
...uls me to a patron is that we can enjoy many snow sports activity like skiing which is be...
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Line 3, column 760, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'am'.
Suggestion: am
...had to walk almost three months at 6:00 am in the morning and the result was surprising. He had r...
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Line 3, column 809, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... morning and the result was surprising. He had reduced almost 5 kg in three months...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79768786127 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63182307524 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586705202312 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1050405193 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3684210526 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05263157895 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171286935975 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517586010007 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611756962071 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111504926845 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354514571007 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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