“According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.”
This article is presented in memo of Super Screen Movie Production Company by its advertising director, he states that Company should allocate greater share of its budget next year for advertising so that they can reach more public withgood contents of movies. according to memo though fewer people attended super Screen-production movie than any other year, some of the movies from production house received greater percentage positive reviews from movie reviewers. It shows there is clear gap between content of movies and advertisment to reach people. This might seem pluasable at first but director's article lacks many important analysis which can prove crucial in his conclusion.
Even though percentage of positive review by movie reviewers increased in last year it happened just for specific movies and it is very much possible that number of those movies are very less. There can be just 2-3 movies which recieved positive reviews which mostly might be the case. It is also possible thta whatever people who came for super screen movie productions movies are for this 2-3 movies only. increasing shre for advertisment won't improve condition in that case.
Author made conclusion that problem does not lie with the quality of movies on basis of some specific positive review but reality can be completly oppsosite. most of the movies might have recieved worst reviews than before and that is the real cuase of reduced viewers of the movies. Company must look into complete data of all the movies rather than just looking into specific cases. it can also conduct survey to get better insights about it s movies qualities. overall predecting movie qualities on the basis on some positive reiews is hasty comclusion.
From the issues raised above it is clear that Super Screen movie Production company need more thorough ananlysis before making any such decision. And increasing Budget for advertising on the basis incomplete and hasty conclusion might not prove beneficial to campany.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 322 350
No. of Characters: 1654 1500
No. of Different Words: 177 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.236 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.137 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.495 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.163 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.425 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.66 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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This article is presented in memo of Sup...
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Suggestion: According
...ore public withgood contents of movies. according to memo though fewer people attended su...
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Suggestion: some
...n-production movie than any other year, some of the movies from production house received g...
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...r percentage positive reviews from movie reviewers. It shows there is clear gap b...
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...h can prove crucial in his conclusion. Even though percentage of positive revie...
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...ovie reviewers increased in last year it happened just for specific movies and it...
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...ns movies are for this 2-3 movies only. increasing shre for advertisment wont improve cond...
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...t wont improve condition in that case. Author made conclusion that problem does...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'recieved the worst'.
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...r insights about it s movies qualities. overall predecting movie qualities on the basis...
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...e positive reiews is hasty comclusion. From the issues raised above it is clear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 321.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21806853583 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53205303899 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535825545171 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.515262032 57.8364921388 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 23.324526521 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.70786347227 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42387761479 0.218282227539 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144906788703 0.0743258471296 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132103547419 0.0701772020484 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257339381572 0.128457276422 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814746577835 0.0628817314937 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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