Many educational institutes are being opened in far off areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
education is the third eye of human beings. Everyone have right to gain knowledge and join any institute for study. However, it is the fact that the numerous educational departments have established in metro cities as well as big cities. Additionaly, far off areas were forced to be deprived of the benefits of education. secondary, this practice caused the migration of people from village to cities for better faculty. In this following paragraphs, I will explore the rational on this practice of this issue. To commence with, Emancipation of knowledge is the main object of education, there are many reasons. One supportive claim is that development of the remote areas will be reached at an apex due to this economy level of backward place rise. Apart from that, manufacturing of new building will be begin like hostel, hospital, cafe, restaurants, club and so on. A further reason in the favor of this argument is that local children will take benefits of this and able to represent their talent easily. Moreover, rural areas girl will highly benefitted from this practice regardless they feel secure, which assist them to concentrate more on their studies. As a result, opportunity will be upsurge and improvement will being shown in remote locality. Despite of its rosy picture some negative impact should not neglected. The obvious reason is that local culture and tradition will come under an attack from outsiders. Furthermore, placement of the students will be declined as compared to those found in developed town. As a result , some natural violence will be faced by local people as well as unconditional activities will be happen. To wrap up, the opening of educational department in far of areas will have more advantages rather than disadvantages. In the future, I sincerely believe that government must improve the educational factuly due to this they easily provide studies environment in villages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Education
education is the third eye of human beings. Every...
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Suggestion: Secondary
... deprived of the benefits of education. secondary, this practice caused the migration of ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...nt their talent easily. Moreover, rural areas girl will highly benefitted from this p...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... Moreover, rural areas girl will highly benefitted from this practice regardless they feel...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'neglect'
Suggestion: neglect
...picture some negative impact should not neglected. The obvious reason is that local cultu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ose found in developed town. As a result , some natural violence will be faced by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, third, well, apart from, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14743589744 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83977937263 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5836977625 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2222222222 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155452674404 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506509293003 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542270580822 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155452674404 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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