International travelling is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening doors to increase the number of tourist. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this
Travelling abroad is now affordable, moreover, the number of countries that are allowing more tourist has increased. Promoting tourism can certainly boost the economy and lead to improved infrastructure but there are also some drawbacks to be taken into account such as economic dependency and conflict.
On the one hand, there are a number of advantages of tourism. Firstly, it can improve the economy of a country. This is due to the fact that foreigners bring money into the country and spend it on services such as hotel bills, transportation and food. This inflow of money helps to stabilize the economy of the nation. For instance, Dubai encouraged more visitors into their country and there was a boost in its economy by 65%. Secondly, tourism can result in development of infrastructure, that is to say that the government of a nation can invest in tourism by building hotels, roads and renovating historical buildings. This has a lasting positive effect on the nation.
On the other hand, one main problem of allowing more tourist is that it can make the country to be over dependent on the revenue from tourism sector. If this sector is not sustained, for example, due to political unrest, the economy of the nation will collapse. Another possible issue is that it can lead to friction between visitors and citizens. This can occur if the culture of the people is not respected. Take for example, there has been several reports of riots in some countries that women are supposed to veil but the female foreigners did not.
In conclusion, while increasing tourism can be beneficial in terms of economic stability and better infrastructure, it can also cause cultural dispute and economic collapse if not sustained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03819444444 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8191001945 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8363544235 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15336307281 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600285173354 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624796946401 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941323716323 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404284789886 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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