More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems overreliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
While in the past there were limited cars and only wealthy people could own one, today because of significant increase in number of cars produced and sold every year, most adults afford buying a car. This attitude toward using personal cars has led to some immense problems, such as air contamination, and urban trafic. But there are also practical measures to handle these issues.
First of all, as all news are declaring, the atmosphere of cities, especially mega cities, are so polluted because of the gas emitted from factories and cars. So many people get diseases and even die each year because of breathing such an unhealthy air. My experience is a compelling example of this. My father, who has never smoked in his life, got lung cancer last year, and since then is doing chemotherapy. Doctors said that this sickness is caused just because living in an over-populated city, Tehran, with harmful air situation.
Second dire consequences of being dependent on private cars is the heavy trafic in cities. Today, almost all streets, and even highways are full of cars. citizens have to spend lots of their daily time driving in the street, which makes them angry and tired. Moreover, there will be less free time for them to spend with family, go to parties, or to relax at home.
Although increasing personal cars in streets causes serious and fatal problems, improving this issue is feasible to some extent. imposing higher taxes on cars is one of them. Furthermore, promoting public transportations and motivating people to use them instead of their own car could help cities triumph over those obstacles. For instance, government should encourage employees to go to office by bus or subway, through giving them free tickets.
In conclusion, it should be borne in mind that the people's tendency to use cars for almost all daily works and purposes results in contaminating the environments, as well as wasting time in crowded streets. Some actions could be done by different organizations in order to stop this trend and its inappropriate consequences. raising the car taxes, and stimulating individuals to travel by public vehicles are two of those doable measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...and sold every year, most adults afford buying a car. This attitude toward using perso...
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Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Citizens
...ts, and even highways are full of cars. citizens have to spend lots of their daily time ...
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Line 13, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Imposing
... this issue is feasible to some extent. imposing higher taxes on cars is one of them. Fu...
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Line 17, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...on, it should be borne in mind that the peoples tendency to use cars for almost all dai...
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Line 17, column 326, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Raising
...end and its inappropriate consequences. raising the car taxes, and stimulating individu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07756232687 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71548125478 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645429362881 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2210705771 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4736842105 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161777957287 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469048219053 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496214812183 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934361186486 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053027020663 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.