some people believe technology has made man more sociable and others think that it has made us less sociable. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people reckon that use of technology has made mankind more sociable whereas others oppose the claim and say, it makes them unfriendly. I think technology has a significant role in social life and its effects depend upon the way one uses it. In this essay, I will look into both sides and try to draw some conclusions.
On the one hand, some people claim that technology helps people to socialize with others. One way to build relationships with other people is by sharing thoughts and ideas. Technology can remove the obstacles related to time and space by allowing individuals to share photos,videos and clips. According to a survey about senior citizens and information technology conducted at Harvard University in 2018 found that social media was quite convenient for seniors to be in touch with their fellow citizens. Hence, technology helps people to remain in contact with others.
On the other hand, some people believe that technology makes us less sociable. However, it is true in some cases where technology can make people unfriendly and isolated. For example, today's youngsters like to watch movies and playing video games on TV or computers rather than going outside, making connections or playing field games such as football or basketball. In this case because of technology, they sometimes become less sociable. However, it totally depends upon an individual and the way he use those technological devices.
To conclude, considering both sides, I personally believe that technology has way more benefits to society to be more social. However, technology may have some drawbacks in socialization but that entirely depends upon its use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , videos
... by allowing individuals to share photos,videos and clips. According to a survey about ...
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Line 9, column 503, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...pends upon an individual and the way he use those technological devices. To co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, whereas, for example, i think, such as, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26119402985 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78194101519 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6900734255 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285774131112 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105047061412 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987639436879 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171903044752 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433235180854 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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