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being keen on buying sophisticated devices is known as an appealing approach to some individuals. There has been widespread public debate over the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. To my book, showing passion for purchasing these modern gadgets besides, having numerous merits should be considered as a negative method due to some harmful effects that may have on people’">people’s life. More and more throughout the world, more individuals are absorbed to follow the latest artificial technologies videlicet, computers, laptops and cellphones. being a fashion conscious person and spend a huge sum of money on buying mentioned goods is an inevitable pitfall from my point of view. First and foremost, not only do these groups of people never be satisfied with their current belongings, but they also waste a large amount of their budgets in order to buy these stunning and mind-boggling gadgets. Moreover, rarely do individuals feel assured and confident about these high-tech devices which are leading to make these kinds of people disillusionment. In stark contrast with the opposed view, the more people show their interests in purveying up-to-date gadgets, the faster and easier their lives elapse. being a computer buff person from some individuals’ point of view is the very foundation of having the ability to use the latest technologies in this modern era. In addition, it is widely argued that new gadgets and laptops are equipped with more modern facilities and they also really come in handy that can foster some human beings to buy them. being addicted to acquire these valuable and prodigious gadgets not only can bring tranquility and comfort to humans’ lives’ qualifications, but also can help individuals to being informed about arresting and prominent progresses in the modern world. For instance, small laptops, which are handheld and portable devices based on their light weights, make it feasible for people to pursue their jobs’ responsibilities from even far distances. Additionally, mobile phones fitted with colossal screens and tiny cameras for the sake of having a wide range of facilities can make the life easier and more comfortable for humankind via providing the possibility of different tasks to be done. To recapitulate, from my perspective, although in this modern era owing to the technology developments many sophisticated devices are innovated to bring tranquility and comfort to people’">people’s life that encourage individuals to earmark their budgets to buy them, based on undeniable drawbacks that occur, this trend is detrimental to individuals’ lives. Maryam rahmani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, as for, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55256723716 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56202917463 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562347188264 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.278013974 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.214285714 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2142857143 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0660596589142 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210793679085 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354545136502 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660596589142 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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