Many countries are currently witnessing an increase in criminal activity among young people. Discuss reasons for this phenomenon and suggest ways to deal with the problem.
It is witnessed that crime activities amongst adults is on rise in many countries and cities. The main reasons for this phenom would be influencing through social media and televisions and due to lack of awareness about what a crime involvement could bring them such as shame and damage to an individual's character in the society. In this essay, we will discuss the reasons and solutions for this quandary.
To embark on, young adolescents are more and more determined by tv's which are telecasting crime scenes, this following leads to detrimental damage to these growing buds. To showcase in their social media some minors are involving in street fights and local dealings and earning unnecessary fame which is again a useless pursuit. For example, in the UK a teenager killed a local politician after being encouraged by their friends through facebook and the teen posted these incidents and got arrested for the same.
If we look into some possible resolutions for this, the government can tackle this issue at a glance by banning the misleading broadcasts in tv and interactive media. Conducting campaigns about making teens aware of good behavior will curb these issues. Whenever a youngster tends to watch age-restricted stuff parental guidance needs to be presented so that we can prevent them from taking the wrong steps. For instance, In HongKong, no youngster commits a crime due to strict rules of the government which may often put them for a lifetime prison. Every parent guides their children towards healthy content and the internet is streamlined so that junk stuff is filtered and passed.
To conclude, although there is a rise in crime rates we can control them through proper channels and making teenagers aware of a bright future and prevent them from thinking about illegal crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11073825503 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65683667846 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2106182218 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149406889219 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594103141899 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064149393298 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892664485834 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863878681499 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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