The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there
may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and
international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Tomorrow, there will be no space for any means of transportation other cars on the road of Britain. The alarming plight raise a wake-up call in society as the consequences of remarkable and significantly increasing in car’s production and consumption. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million cars on Britain’s street leading to a suggestion of encouraging alternatives for transporting and establishing international laws to control car ownership and use. Personally, I completely concur with the former but have a doubt on the latter in terms of practical application.
The alternative forms of transport should be encouraged is anchored for a reason that this would help reducing the emission of carbon dioxide, like using public transportation, going on a bike or walking if any. A sedan car carries maximum of 4 people and even 7 people for an SUV might not be considered as friendly with environment since it leaks a great amount of harmful gas to atmosphere, while a tram or an electric car does not. In addition, using some medium of transportation outside cars would have a tremendous benefit to the health in general. Many people in modern society are bereft of daily exercise leading to the high risk of disease such as heart attack or obesity while going on a bike, walking or using public transportation would reduce this risk.
Another school of thought that government should validate the laws on controlling car ownership and use and apply this worldwide. However, this suggestion in fragile and devoid of substance because many countries put the liberation and democracy as ultimate purpose in which this statements could raise a debate and clearly argument in any social class. People have the same right, and this right of owning property is undeniable. Taking away or putting it in control might not a prudent and wisely regulation.
Subsequently weighing all the afore mention, it can be safety to state that seeking the supporting of citizen in using more friendly environment vehicles instead of car is indispensable and becoming an essential duty for any government in the world. Beside, enforcing any law for restriction of car ownership and use should be studied carefully because of its sensitiveness.
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or disagree wit 67
- The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 theremay be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged andinternational laws introduced to control car ownership and use.To what ext 84
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...ransportation would reduce this risk. Another school of thought that governmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, as to, in addition, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12466124661 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08983261782 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574525745257 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7874066759 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.071428571 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315421261844 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109981247792 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105360565685 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189224910355 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752924467289 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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