You are working for international company and would like to spend six months in its head office in different country
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to work in company head office for six months
say how your work could be done when you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging this.
Dear Mr.Peter
I am writing to check for potential transfer to Company's head office for duration of 6 months.
As you are aware, we have been working from Chicago office for past 3 years. As our office is growing, I couldn't get a chance to travel and meet our colleagues back in its in headquarters in UK. We are starting a new project next month and
all the technical team sits in UK. It would be great if I get a chance to travel to UK and work for 6 months so that we can kick start the initial part of the project.
As Client is from Ireland, it would be great if I get a chance to meet them in person and build a rapport with the client.
While I am away, I will be working on the current project and deliverable wont be affected at anytime as current project will be my first priority. I would like to check with you whether you are good with this approach and if yes, I can talk to the HR team to initiate the process. As this will be official trip, I would need your approval to book for travel arrangements.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours Sincerely
Kumar
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-04 | kumarkrish | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Peter
Dear Mr.Peter I am writing to check for potentia...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...st 3 years. As our office is growing, I couldnt get a chance to travel and meet our col...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re starting a new project next month and all the technical team sits in UK. It wo...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...tarting a new project next month and all the technical team sits in UK. It would...
^^^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...avel arrangements. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours Sincerely Kum...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37320574163 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35918648206 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.31988026 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0909090909 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292169311571 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105538246482 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600453332696 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128784628796 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643645809003 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 70.7449484536 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.