You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter:
Say where / when you went on holiday
Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday
Tell them what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the trip I recently took with your travel agency.
Last month, on the 25th of September, I went on a vacation with my wife to the Andaman and Nicobar islands which I booked well in advance with your company and was ensured about all the arrangements I asked for.
As promised, a cab came to pick us up from the airport, although it was not air-conditioned as mentioned in our itinerary. In addition, while making the reservation for the hotel I specifically asked for an ocean view room, rather we had to stay in a garden view because my repetitive efforts to contact your support staff failed as no one replied to my phone calls and emails to handle the related issue.
However, the hotel staff was quite courteous and gave us a complimentary meal to compensate for the inconvenience occurred due to the negligence of your staff.
I would like to suggest that you should make proper arrangements if you want your business to grow. Also, as I have paid for a much expensive room than we stayed in, I am entitled to a refund of rupees nine thousand.
I look forward to receiving your prompt response.
Yours faithfully
James
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-04 | anmol.anubha | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 31, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... response. Yours faithfully James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81516587678 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86220612366 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654028436019 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2794190793 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.888888889 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240254790866 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104476705757 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881614894565 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120420266553 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757342432455 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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