Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, all the commercial meetings and trainings are conducted online. While business-related works are very prompt in online, the drawbacks regarding these are manifold, but I would say that although the shortcomings are a lot, the advantages are more than any disadvantages.
First and foremost, people, from the business world, would like to make conversation, meetings, and trainings with business partners in online. However, there are myriads of pitfalls communicating through the internet with the business person. For example, most of the older people are not used to using the technology and software, while other participants discover the fact that they can not , sometimes, connect due to a slow internet connect, platform malfunction. The other drawback is that they can not make face-to-face communication, which is considered the most effective and successful way of business meetings and trainings. Thus, doing business in online is difficult.
On the contrary, I have confirmed that if a person makes a business with another business partner by conducting meetings and having a teaching section in online, he/she will be benefited. This is because, it saves time and money. Besides that , attendants do not need to travel a long distance, because they can connect with people sitting any corner of the world. The other advantage is that all the papers and business documents would be verified easily and conveniently among business partners. Therefore, connecting online with the business person has plenty of positive signs.
In conclusion, it is very popular that these days, business tycoons are connecting with their business partners through the internet. Despite having plenty of drawbacks, the privilege of communication by having discussion, meeting or training section with business minds in online are many.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59717314488 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97374165447 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4445046045 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184284438056 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07829301167 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614608201546 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120184028209 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024080168804 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.