People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
It's always important to justify the taken decision. It can help people analyze and evaluate the consequences of the taken decision. It can be possible for a company to lose their profit by firing their most experienced employeed, based on their Boss's temporary anger for incompletion of given task.
it's indeed true that most of the decisions taken without proper justifications are bad decisions. people's emotions tend to change over time. Thus, taking decisions based on emotions often leads to bad decisions, because they are taken without proper justification and which leads to many consequences. if provided with proper justification, then it can help people evaluate it's pros and cons. I am totally disagree with the notion that emotional decisions taken with proper justification often leads to bad decisions.
emotional decisions are product of that temporary emotional moment. In that emotional moment person can't think about consequences. it may be good or bad. many of the criminals, who commited murder are victims of those emotional decisions they have taken without justification. they are forced by their anger to take decision of taking someone's life for that temporary moment. if they have justified their decision before taking the other's life, it would certainly prevent them from wrongdoing. they will also be living a normal peaceful life.
Every emotional decisions require proper justification, without which one cannot evaluate it's
consequences. decisions are taken just to provide a solution for a problem, and it can never be evaluated without proper justification.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 442.535393258 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59296482412 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94652388073 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562814070352 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0551849907 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314657455987 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118897021011 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668293282079 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191645826352 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044659295144 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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