A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Hi John,
I hope this letter finds you in healthy spirits. I am very thankful for the favor you agreed to offer to take care of my house and dog Bruno during my one-week vacation trip. I am writing this to inform you about some important chores you have to manage these days.
Firstly, every morning two packets of milk are being delivered, you have to pick them on time to avoid its contamination. Secondly, as the weather is getting extremely hot I request you to water the plants on a daily basis. Finally, cornflakes are kept at the kitchen shelf you have to feed them to my pet twice a day. Additionally, fill its bowl of water regularly as it consumes plenty of water throughout the day.
As I am going overseas, my current mobile number will not be reachable but you can contact me through an internet call, though I will share my number as soon as possible. If I might not be available feel free to call my father. Also, considering your taste, I have put fresh multi-grain bread in the refrigerator you can consume it any time. Moreover, I will also bring your favorite dark Australian chocolate as a token of thanks.
Again thank you for the support.
Yours lovingly,
Prabh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Bruno during my one-week vacation trip. I am writing this to inform you about som...
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Line 13, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll share my number as soon as possible. If I might not be available feel free to c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66511627907 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55697224954 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66976744186 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3248339776 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1538461538 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209700041942 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769129774399 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507304292385 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117680122713 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036071920326 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.