The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011-2014.
The line graph illustrates the different number of books can read by the two gender at Burnaby Public Library over the last four years.
Overall, men has a significant increased of reading the books up to the last year compared to women which had a peaked trend with a sudden decrease over the last four years.
In the first two years the number of books read by men was slightly increased to around 4000. It had peaked to exact 10000 in 2013 and shows a rapid increased in 2014 for about 14000 at Burnaby Public Library.
In contrast, women had a proportion of books to read approximately 8000 in 2012. It climbed to around 10000 in 2013 and suddenly fell for about below 8000 in 2014 at Burnaby Public Library, respectively.
- Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The charts show gross sales in five departments in the years 2010 and 2012 74
- Many people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and transportation.Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 623.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75572519084 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45984001303 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 283.868780488 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9759162588 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409212296715 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193535961991 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643860284703 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2439390381 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762623129499 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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