Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable; others, however, think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
In this Modern world, television is the most popular source of recreation as well as gaining beneficial knowledge.some individuals believe that television plays a vital role in entertainment and fun.However, at the same time , a body of opinion claims that it is just losing of precious time.I am partially agree with given connotation and would also discuss some arguments in favour of disagreement.
To commence with, it is undeniable fact that television provides entertainment and also gives refreshment to the mind.In other words, people enjoy their favourite serials on the television with their family and loved ones.it also strengthens the relationship bond between the members as they spend quality time with each other while enjoying the film.Moreover, it also act as a stress buster as it changes people focus from monotonous daily routine activities.For an instance, these days people prefer to watch movies at their own home with their companions without spending even a penny on the threature tickets.
On flip side, there are also some drawbacks regarding this notion such as ignorance of studies and some health ailments.To cleat this, sometimes children ignore their studies just in order to watch cartoons and this leads to low academic performance of the student as they wasted much of time.Not only this, by gazing at the bright screen of television, often results in weakening of eye-sight.For example, a survey conducted in austraila, shows that, sixty percent of people have weak eye-sight due to over watching of television.
Hammering the last nail, although there are many advantages : recreation, stress buster, and utilizing spare time in interesting way, demerits cannot be ignored at all as it affects the studies and health of people.Therefore, television should be watched in proper manner and time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.998669939 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649305555556 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.525442106 49.4020404114 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 391.5 106.682146367 367% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.7667163134 347% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.5 7.06120827912 418% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146494737933 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827845083964 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229159200838 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827845083964 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229159200838 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.2 13.0946893788 307% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.46 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.03 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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