People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
People follow different methods to make decisions. most of them make decisions based on past life experience and therefore, they react situations in different ways. emotions are the most complicated part of our life and a human being cannot control their own emotions. The strong emotions like anger, fear, sorrow and etc. rises relatively quickly and these deep emotions can change the way that the person behaves or the person's feeling toward others. therefore, in my point of view, I strongly agree with the argument that poor decisions can be made through emotions and to make good decisions we should first think about it logically. To bolster my claim three main factors can be considered as follows.
First of all, examples for the poor decisions made with emotions can be find in recent new papers. The reason for most of the murder cases reported in newspapers are because of sudden angry feeling towards the other party. Sometimes people tend to kill their own belongings due to these wrong decisions. If the person did not make decisions with deep emotions the situation may be way more than better. this is valid for bad emotions like anger, jealousy as well as positive emotions such as happiness. It is possible that the person with full of happiness made the wrong decision because of the good mood.
Furthermore, when making decisions people should be more logical and analytical. As mention in the above emotions are based on the current situation and they arise very quickly. When making decisions human being need more time to think about possible negative and positive factors. If the time was taken by people to fade their emotions before engaging in any sort of activity and make decisions based on logical and rational thinking the result would be far more better.
Although, some may argue that it is okay to make decisions with emotions if we justify those decisions with logic afterwards. However, I did not agree with this because if the person decides at once it is very rare that the person may see negative or the wrong part in their own decisions. it is human nature that they always believe that what they feeling and what they have done is correct. therefore, though they going to justify the decision with logic most of the time they tend to find shreds of evidence and facts to strengthen their decision than undermine that. this fact does not always true but most of the though the people can see wrongdoings of the third party they cannot see own false points.
All and all, from the above factors it is clear that decisions based on the current emotion of a person can be harmful in many ways. The decision-makers full depend on emotions could not make good decisions. if the person makes decisions with logical reasoning that a person has more ability to make a good and relevant decision than the person who clouds with emotions. therefore, as the above statement mentioned most of the time people who made decisions based on emotions are poor decision makers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2518.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88932038835 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39343999308 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425242718447 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 780.3 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
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Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 118.986275619 81% => OK
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Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.15627578014 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13636309151 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320270099107 0.150359130593 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101539343623 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.