Writing Task 2
Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of an single movie.
Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie?
What factors contribute to the success of a movie?
A few production houses spend million of dollars on the making of movie to make a unique masterpiece of art which collects sensation in the market. Still, it is questionable upon spending a lot of money on making of movie for bringing the desirable taste. This essay intends to discuss the need to spend a lot of many to make a good film and the factor which contribute to success of movie.
To begin with, the contributing factor which are not many but few. First of all, if those are paid attention while producing movie, the best masterpiece can be produced. For example the old Hindi movie "Jane Bhi Do Yaro" was little budget though the comedian movie, earned a lot of box office collection. On the other side the movie “Ajooba which was known for expensive shooting sets, was not able to collect the collection and had been flopped.
A good movie needs the best dialogues and delivery of the dialogues, good lyrics and music for songs. Moreover, the story which has some inspirational message or entertaining or something new can be the factor which contributes to the success of movie and if these factors are not given the will movie will have more chance to fail.
On other hand, where the big movie houses create a massive production and spend a oceans of money to design, prepare the shooting sets, hiring expensive artists and splurge on the costumes and jewellery may not bring the effect to be success. It is observed that public go for the real message of the movie. If the message is not targeting the public or in other words if the public do not get any message from the movie, it give chance to the public to defame the movie and finally it leads to the failure of movie.
In summing up all the information where we discussed the contribute factors which leads to commercial outcome and spending oceans of money, can draw only the conclusion that new story of new message is demand of the public to watch and this must be taken in consideration instead of spending a lot on splurges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
A few production houses spend million of dollars on the making of movie to ma...
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Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s create a massive production and spend a oceans of money to design, prepare the ...
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Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a ocean' or simply 'oceans'?
Suggestion: a ocean; oceans
...s create a massive production and spend a oceans of money to design, prepare the shootin...
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Line 13, column 426, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
... not get any message from the movie, it give chance to the public to defame the movi...
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Line 17, column 54, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... all the information where we discussed the contribute factors which leads to commercial outco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, first of all, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67688022284 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54836443245 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481894150418 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.683978751 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.153846154 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355012903964 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132807349358 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087962094631 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206912035586 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125520104102 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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