A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit.
Dear Mangi,
I am writing to thank you for your invitation.It’s very kind of you But unfortunately I won’t be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule.I hope you understand my situation.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I’ve recently started a new job teaching English and I’ve been working around the clock. I don’t mean to complaini,I’ve been enjoying it immensely .The school I’m working at is my old school.It’s quite interesting teaching with people who used to be my teachers.
Could you let me know the another time you will be free? I would love to come to stay. I’m interested in seeing you new house and family.I’’be free in the new year and public holidays because of school holidays.I’ll also be fine in in winter a .I’d certainly love to escape the cold to visit you then
Please let me know.
Yours friend,
Divys
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19078947368 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62799570553 2.54303337028 143% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677631578947 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.4914367326 44.8134815571 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172496506914 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104115082717 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864632736737 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955344809228 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906226538814 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.