A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit.
Dear Mangi,
I am writing to thank you for your invitation. It’s very kind of you But unfortunately I won’t be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule. I hope you understand my situation.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I’ve recently started a new job teaching English and I’ve been working around the clock. I don’t mean to complaini, I’ve been enjoying it immensely. The school I’m working at is my old school. It’s quite interesting teaching with people who used to be my teachers.
Could you let me know the another time you will be free? I would love to come to stay. I’m interested in seeing you new house and family. I’’be free in the new year and public holidays because of school holidays. I’ll also be fine in in winter a .
I’d certainly love to escape the cold to visit you then.
Please let me know.
Yours friend,
Divys
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 229, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ic holidays because of school holidays. I'll also be fine in in winter a . I&ap...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...school holidays. I'll also be fine in in winter a . I'd certainly love to...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 265, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'a'?
...ys. I'll also be fine in in winter a . I'd certainly love to escape the...
^^^
Line 13, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s. I'll also be fine in in winter a . I'd certainly love to escape the...
^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...apos;ll also be fine in in winter a . I'd certainly love to escape the cold to ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05696202532 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82222499421 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670886075949 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9667747967 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.9375 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 9.875 16.8248392259 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173664702368 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763560302535 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919540824318 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113944430063 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764322874969 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.8 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.59 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.