Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Dancing plays an important role in a culture.
since the dranwn of civilization, we know every culture is a complex of various element, and consists of singing, dancing, plays, etc. Although some people might adhere to the idea that dancing palys a prominent role in cultures, others possess the conviction that its function is not essential. As far as I am concerned, I am of the opinion that the role of dancing cannot be neglected in cultures. I will elaborate on my reasons through the following paragraphs.
To start with, one should take into account that dancing helps a history of a country and its culture to continue to live. since dancing has symbols which represent the cultural signs of a society, by performing a special dance, people will remember their past as a nation. An example would account for this fact: there is a ritual dance in my country, which people gather around a fire at the end of the winter, and perform dance and sing traditional songs to remember how our ancestors were celebrating the emerging of the spring. they raise their hands to the sky and wave them to ask for rain, jump on top of the fire to show they are fearless, stand around the fire holding hands to demonstrate the fact that they always get eachother’s back.
another noteworthy reason that should be mentioned is that the function of dancing is to bring people together and fortify the nation’s union. dancing is a social event and by being acted, people from different parts oh the country will come together regardless of their race and cultural differences. Not only they enjoy the activity and have a good time, but also feel closer to one another after that. it is obvious to mention that every society contains many subcultures and their people have distinct characteristics from each other. dancing is a way that these people will share the same activity. As a result, they will be more motivated to feel sympathy and loyalty to their country and nation. For instance, every year a dance festival holds in Brasil and people all around the world go there to be a part of this event. it is not far from the imagination that the more they have good times, the more they spend time communicating with others. Finally, they will find many similarities among themselves and feel close to others.
To wrap it up, I do believe that dancing plays undeniable role in every culture because it keeps the history of a nation alive and makes people to be united with each other. Had the dance would have been removed from cultures, humanity would miss a great chance to express his feeling and values through the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for instance, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77555555556 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55789747765 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.87763289 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.105263158 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6842105263 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129749311204 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423394454933 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042730741491 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932180360934 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363297883609 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.