In general, people are living longer now. Which of the following do you think is the main cause of this phenomenon?
Technological improvements
Changes to education systems
Improvements to our diets
The education system and a healthy diet are also big players in everyone's life however, I believe that Technology improvement is the major reason which influenced the people's life at most. I have a few reasons which I will explore below.
To begin with, advancement in the medical field was one of the crucial steps in saving people's life. For example, last year, we came to know that my father-in-law has some problems in a heart valve, in one week, bypass surgery has been performed and now he is all fine thanks to efficient medical
diagnostic techniques. If we couldn't have identified this situation in time, it would have been difficult. These days, technology has been
developed in such, it really affected the medical condition of people in good way.
Furthermore, technology also plays a vital role in daily life. For example, I become mom last year and I did not have time to go groceries or to buy baby stuff but these days online shopping delivery is so easy. Life becomes so easier after having such a service or technology. Here technology did not affect directly to live longer but somehow it definitely affected lives for the long term. Research has been shown that a happy life plays a very important role in peoples life do does technology.
In conclusion, I would like to say that because of technology such as medical diagnosis peoples are live a longer life as well as cheerful because of online access of everything you want
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...ell as cheerful because of online access of everything you want
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86904761905 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64132838668 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8427304997 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163536800352 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574630947542 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458304061888 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799699881173 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409050533932 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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