Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Human beings have to make an important decision in every step of their life such as find a job, marriage, bring a baby, to name but a few. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion among psychologist about positive and negative effects a decision in an individual's life. Some psychologist believe that adult persons have enough perspective to make their important decisions on their own. Others, on the other hand, advocate the idea that people should consider other's perspective in their decisions. I personally, concur with the latter. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most important reasons.
To begin with, different people have different perspectives that could be very helpful in ultimate decision. In other words, individuals according to their characteristics see different aspects of an issue. If a person considers different idea from different people to make a decision, he/she can make a rational decision. For example, I can recall when I decided to start a business. I think with myself that I considered all aspects of the matter. When I talked to my father about my planning. He asked me are you planning to rent a place for this work. I became shocked that I did not think to this issue. Had I not talked to my father that day, I would have faced to a big dilemma in my job.
Secondly, sometimes people are not in good mood to make a correct decision, so they need to take guide from trustful people. For example, my first boyfriend hurt me a lot. When I decided to cut with him, I was very emotional and I could not take an correct action for my life. I consulted with imitate friend and she confirmed my decision, so I became confident with my decision.
To sum up, some of our wrong measures for our life cannot be compensated later. Therefore, people should gather as much information as possible from intellectual people to be satisfied with their decision. This because a person cannot see all the aspects of an issue and they may not be in proper mental circumstances to take a thoughtful measure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...e and negative effects a decision in an individuals life. Some psychologist believe that ad...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...I considered all aspects of the matter. When I talked to my father about my planning...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...was very emotional and I could not take an correct action for my life. I consulted...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78370786517 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82383017441 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51404494382 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5680787285 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4090909091 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14262930051 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419695040971 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344686101987 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897070319127 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469559941667 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.