In a number of countries, some people think that it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A section of society deem that it is essential to utilise a vast amount of wealth on establishing new railway tracks for fastest trains between urban areas; whereas, others supports to expand money to recover conditions of old public transport. This easy will shed light on both notions along with my opinion.
One school of thought said that it is mandatory to spend a huge sum of money for constructing new railway lines for faster rails because these trains are helping humans for save time. Apart from that, in today is world everyone have Hetic schedule due to their desire to earn more income to providing best bread and butter to their families. In addition to this, these fastest rails useful for masses to reach them their work place very quickly and they can consume a some amount of time to travel by trains and utilise this time in another work. For example, a metro train in Delhi are very helpful for their citizens because it is very fast and people reaching at their destination with in some minutes.
The another school of thought support second view the reason is that a wealth should be spent to recovering existing public transport because if regime will spend a some number of money to repair old government vehicles than it’s beneficial for authorities’s funds. Moreover, these transport are staying freely at one place and this vehicles have not any advantages, so, if these public transport repairs by regime than it provide some income in form of fairs of vehicles. Beside that, these old transport can take little sum of wealth for recovering and better to save vast amount of wealth for nations. In other words, government vehicles are helping to reduce congestion of private vehicles on roads. For example, in PRTC workshops of punjab government, a huge amount of existing buses are staying there freely because they needs repairing but regime neglect to use wealth on those to repair and buy new one buses which effect government ‘s fund.
In my opinion, they both views are better for nations because faster trains are beneficial for consuming time and reaching quickly as well as government vehicles are necessary for repairing and offer income to authorities.
In conclusion, although, faster trains are useful to save time but old public transports are also helpful to recover economy growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ort are staying freely at one place and this vehicles have not any advantages, so, i...
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Line 5, column 838, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...s are staying there freely because they needs repairing but regime neglect to use wea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97709923664 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50489488364 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496183206107 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0796315749 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.461538462 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2307692308 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267045688731 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963221733875 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773790165277 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137477240653 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490827641798 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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