Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both the views and give our opinion.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Of late, people are of the opinion that enjoying movies on their mobile gadgets and
tablets outweigh the fun over the silver screen while others have a perception
that an exhilarating experience in movie theatre outmatches the entertainment
quotient than any other means. In my opinion, based on the requirement of the situation,
the mode of viewing the motion pictures should be opted.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">On the one
hand, people who have a liking towards the comfortable use of mobile phones in
order to enjoy movies, have some justifications. Firstly, the movie tickets
nowadays are very expensive. The substantial growth in the entertainment industry
has led to market monopoly which has resulted in increased prices. Secondly,
the popcorns and snacks sold in the theatres presently are costlier than the
costly tickets of the motion pictures. Thus, for the real movie experience, an average
family spend thousands of rupees that can upset the monthly budget.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">On the other
hand, the other people tend to be inclined to go for the silver screen for an
entertaining experience and they have explanations to advocate the same. Firstly,
the surround sound system with Dolby Digital Technology which has taken a step
up. The kind of experience people get from the surround sound atmosphere and 3D
pictures in animation movies enliven the pictures shown. Secondly, people like
to go to the cinema also to get the feeling of large screens. The size of the screen
gives a vibrant and vivid definition to the magnificent movies running. These trigger
an adrenaline rush which is difficult to obtain from mobile gadgets and
tablets.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">In conclusion, it would be justifiably right to say that considering circumstances, the decisions to make a choice of view modes could be suggested.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both the views and give our opinion. 73
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both the views and give our opinion. 78
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both the views and give our opinion. 84
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both the views and give our opinion. 78
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both the views and give our opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33445945946 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.55303469307 2.80592935109 198% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.358165486 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.454545455 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112824797731 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415944324955 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401464617445 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0329677245597 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345691668095 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.73 12.4159519038 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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