some people believe that the media should be allowed to publish private information about people, while others are against it.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion and relevant examples.
The media is an individual body which works on Content publication and marketing. Many people assume that media should have the authority to declare personal information because those are not protected by Intellectual Property law and no litigation Constrain them. However, others oppose it stating, revealing personal information may ruin their career and reputation amongst the society. I believe that media should be authorized to publish private information except for social issues.
The media is primarily engaged in awaring community about the latest political, sports and national issues. As media has the right to publish any content outside of law criteria, and information like; corruption, crime rate, political growth and economy of the country are essential content that people should aware of. The media grabs personal income of political leader via “RIGHT TO INFORMATION” act and exposed lot of corrupted leaders which shows their greedy and awful work, and engulfed tax money of community. For instance, Mr. chidambaram is under custody for holding unauthorised currencies and involving in the printing of it, exposing voters hated them.
However, some personal information like social issues and financial problems should not be published by media as these have huge impact on their career. Criticizing based on income may create bias on individuals judgements and relation with friends and family, which should be ben for the media. For example, the actor, Prabhas was trolled on social media after bahubali movie due to it's financial status as he was lacking money.
To summerise, The media should assess critical information and it's outcome before it goes live. such personal social issues and financial problems should be kept Private until if it is not illegal. But I personally appreciate work of news agency which aware people about fraud and unloyal leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, except for, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50680272109 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72820497966 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4525421113 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239737813049 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912014719832 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610611195509 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159664182849 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325493429136 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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