Some people believes that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your experience
In the state of this art society, there are several ideas suppose that allowing children to decide their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, entertainment) that likely make for them a bad habit. Other people think that it is necessary for children to make decision about issues that affect them. this essay is going to debate about this problem.
In my considerate, both of views above that always have two points of individuals which it is good and bad. Firstly, when we respect children’s idea such as agree for them who can make and choice everything on their life, then, children will be taught by their parents the way how to respect everyone because children have innocently mind, so they recognize adult’s action in order that mimic and learn too fast. Secondly, children gradually study and develop their mental, more independent on their habits. For instance, a child always has to hear opinions from their parents who like a strong-girl, so they compel their daughter have to wear jeans, T-shirt, and sneaker even though she just likes princess dresses and ballet pumps. Moreover, in Viet Nam on feudal frame, people said “parents site any place, child have to sit there” that it is mean parents will choose wife or husband for their child, afterward, they have to marry. but, a wedding doesn’t have love whether they can happy.
In another hand, if dad and mom always allow for the children can do everything they want, and make them satisfy with their demand that will create for them a bad routine cause they know mom or dad who are going to respond their offers. Hence, they become a person just think about their self, and their emotion.
In conclusion, two points of this views above have good and not good face. but, I believe respect children’s idea which have more pros than the second opinion. I think adults who should adjust several things in order that don’t make for children have bad behave.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92537313433 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44917323669 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573134328358 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4604573717 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289922659759 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103619644649 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857135432703 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186605526135 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921543336241 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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