In some countries, employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacations time each year. In other countries, employees are given four to six weeks of paid vacation time.
Consider the needs of both employee and employer, what do you think is the reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have? Give reasons for your answer and include may relevant examples from your knowledge of experience.
When the summer is coming the word “vacations” start to be felt in the air in the air. In some nations employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year, but in others they are given four or six weeks. In my opinion two weeks is insufficient, but six weeks is excessive, so four weeks is equitable for employee and employer.
First of all, I contemplate that two weeks over fifty-two it is unfair. People need to repose their mind to be more efficient. In addition to spend time with family, doing a trip or just having free time. In another scale, there are studies that prove after forty-five minutes persons star losing the attention. Beside six-week can be harmful because it cuts the continuity of work and projects.
And what about employer? Who must pay someone who is not working. Google, Apple, Microsoft among others, know perfectly that giving their employees four weeks of paid vacation time each year, makes workers happier by significantly improving their performance. Opposite is what happens in nations like China, where employees have journeys of eighteen hours per day and in some case only one week paid vacation. Sad workers is synonymous to low efficient.
In conclusion, if the biggest and most powerful companies in the Word give their employees four weeks paid vacation, generating huge economic results, and making them happy, is the biggest testimony that thirty-one days are the perfect balance for both parts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0612244898 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73074951609 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644897959184 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.3139270966 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450782400932 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127297625832 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158910203935 0.0667982634062 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249068589534 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135738457543 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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