In poorer families, school children may have to work part-time as well as study.
Discuss the merits and demerits for these children
These days, the proportion of children working besides studying at school is high and more likely to happen in families which are suffering from poverty. In this following essay, I will outline the positive and negative aspects of this phenomena.
To begin with, apropos advantages of children doing part-time job, they have more opportunities to interact with the society, and simultaneously gain experiences through learning in the school of hard knocks and real life connection at the young age, which may be useful and beneficial for themselves later. Secondly, as poor schoolchildren do not have their parents worried or taken care of studies and work, good quality such as self-discipline, independence, liability and responsibility would be enhance, as well as self-care skill, housekeeping skill, social skill or even cognitive skill will be taken shape. Accordingly, over time, an indigent child will grow up more maturely and painstakingly when it comes to comparing to peers at the sane age.
Nevertheless, working part-time might have several disadvantages for those who are currently spending time acquiring knowledge at school. In fact, concentrating on studies and catching up with others in the class are probably difficult and challenging, as work may occupy most of the time and they have to balance schooling and work on a regular and long-term basis. Furthermore, this practice would get children to exhaustion, stress and pressure, because their square time would be sacrificed, when they should have been filled themselves in relaxation, or played recreational games with friends. With a view to supporting his or her family, he or she may have encouragement on top of the strength so as to bravely and strongly cope with difficulties ahead.
To summarize, both working and studying concurrently bring helpfulnesses and big issues for children who are in the period of living in a naive and happy world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32352941176 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09979163641 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624183006536 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5960487384 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.9 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282283120596 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10680874825 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700221785448 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160119071148 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483973358516 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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