Most of the children these days are spending their time playing computer games and spend less time playing outdoor sports. Why is this? Is this positive or negative?
In recent years, a majority of kids tend to immerse themselves into computer games for long hours and dedicated less time for playing outdoor activities. there are several reasons for this trend, and I believe that the impacts that it has on children are negative.
there are several reasons why children spending too much concerns on video games these days. Firstly, in order to make ends meet and support for their family, most parents are now having to face with hectic schedules at work and social activities, and therefore they do not have much time to take care of their offspring. To protect these children safer, parents tend to leave them alone at home and allow them play with a computer or smart phone, which has available installed games. In addition, the school day is already long enough for young kids. When they arrive home exhausted, they lack energy to practice sports or simply go for a walk. As a result, they choose games as a great way to unwind.
However, I would argue that its drawbacks are significant outweigh the benefits. The main tremendous effect is that gaming may be highly addictive to players. For example, many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. Consequently, several adverse effect can be seen from this habits such as the lack of sleep or bad exam outcome at school. Besides, the rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle.
In conclusion, there are several factors caused to the above situation, and most of them have adverse impacts on children life.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-18 | trung99909 | 61 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ss time for playing outdoor activities. there are several reasons for this trend, and...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...t it has on children are negative. there are several reasons why children spendi...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...veral reasons why children spending too much concerns on video games these days. Fir...
^^^^
Line 9, column 359, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...several adverse effect can be seen from this habits such as the lack of sleep or bad...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80565371025 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38233309888 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1110033013 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274548494179 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740863852552 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647933926047 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144533983009 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640023828822 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.