You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include:
– Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened.
– Polite. No one responds to insults.
– Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen?
– Firmness. You want to be taken seriously
Dear Manager,
Today, I am writing to complain about the substandard services I received during the moonlit dinner I had with my friends this Tuesday evening.
To start with, after I arrived on time along with my friends, I waited in the queue for half an hour despite having reservation. Then, the lighting was not well-lit, which made visibility difficult. Next, I have complained about a fly in my soup; the staff apologised, but did not replace the bowl with a fresh one. Finally, the valet parking personnel misplaced my car keys and it took him a while to find it while I stood waiting for him.
My complaint is a learning lesson to everyone. With immediate effect, replace your indolent staff i.e. who are not showing interest in their work and not fast enough. I would also recommend changes to the terrace dining area, that is, illuminate it. Subsequently, this will improve customer service.
Due to the above inconveniences, I am demanding a full refund and if your impervious to my written complaint, I will sue you in the consumer court.
Regards,
Jack Dan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then, well, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93513513514 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74507328121 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708108108108 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9573422068 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0618594537751 0.216113520407 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0194322115527 0.0766984524023 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286372864939 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0379363971672 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378381633382 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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