You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Congratulate him/her for also being accepted
Ask him/her if he/she would like to be your roommate
Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ___,
Dear Yaman,
I hope you are doing very well, Firstly, I’d like to congratulate you on the acceptance to study Fine Arts at Nancy University in Paris. I really excited to see you there. As you may know, I also got acceptance to study Law at Lwise University which’s beside your university.
I am just writing to ask you whether you do not mind if we share a flat nearby the university, hence, I have no connection there and to be honest it’s very difficult for me to trust any one to live with.
By the way, there are some activities we can do together that will help us to cope with the new life. As I told you before, I had been working in an Arabic restaurant for more than 3 years, so I can cook some delicious food. Moreover, we can split the apartment cleaning based on our availabilities. And finally we can share the grocery expenses to save as much as we can.
I look forward to catching up soon in Paris!
Take care,
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Yaman, I hope you are doing very well, Firstly,...
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Line 9, column 188, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...t's very difficult for me to trust any one to live with. By the way, there a...
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Line 21, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ching up soon in Paris! Take care, Bilal
^^^^
Line 23, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon in Paris! Take care, Bilal
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, well, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49438202247 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62743625711 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696629213483 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6140661058 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8888888889 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 4.34317383033 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13910547303 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503628527087 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514665214397 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708246229862 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640119238487 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.