The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry, or other field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
For the young people to flourish in the society they really need to choose the path that is friendly, the society is responsible for the upbringing for this young people. Young people should have a camaraderie among themselves in order for them to show their potential, I strongly agree to the point that the young people should choose the path of cooperation rather than competition for the following reasons.
For anyone to reach the apogee of their field they really need to cooperate with others, make some healthy relations and should also somewhere rely on others. Competition does not only jeopardize their relation but also impede their way to triumph. One can have a successful career if it ignores the evil in oneself, such as if one student is not able to fathom any problem and other is also facing the problem with say other question and each of them knows th answers to the each other's question and they both are reluctant to help because of the competition then this nature will be eventually be futile for them logically. If they show the feeling of helping then both then burgeon together.
In the government or any industry where the two people are not willing to cooperate with each other will ultimately results in stagnation of progress. Say such as in the government's work, One can not rely their work to complete by single person. there are various department where each work is logically divided and for one work to get completed one has to go to different departments to get their work done. However if one of the department's worker deny to cooperate with the inter department's worker then the person may find it difficult to get work done. And gradually this slows the process of work in the department.
Suppose any person who run company which manufactures mobile. and this company has to solely dependent on the company which makes the battery of the mobile, then showing the nature of competition and aversion will surely not help them to reach pinnacle. if they cooperation and some healthy relation then both of their work can move smoothly and in helping nature both can swift in their business.
Thus one may think that competition is needed for the youth to flourish. However the lack of cooperation will surely not lead them to great leaders. which may impede their progress in the future because ultimately it is society where we all have to depend on each other to move in forward direction.
- Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry, or other field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: deny cooperating
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... surely not lead them to great leaders. which may impede their progress in the future...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, then, thus, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81947743468 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51090118811 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441805225653 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0597664963 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.352941176 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7647058824 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178232600386 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059023336268 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778571421964 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113577815292 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101638853327 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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