There have been many inventions in human history. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Throughout history, humans have invented many tools to help people live more easily. It is commonly accepted that the invention of the internet is of greatest importance. From my point of view, I partly agree with that viewpoint.
On the one hand, I believe that the internet is the most momentous invention. In the digital era, the internet is an enormous storage of information, in which people are able to search for knowledge of any single aspect. As a result, people can broaden their horizons. In addition, the internet gives birth to other breakthroughs like e-commerce and social networks. A typical example can be seen on Facebook, which is the most popular way of exchanging information among friends and family members. Without the internet connection, people would be isolated and the world might become a distant place for everyone.
On the other hand, I accept that other discoveries play the same role as the internet. The first one worthy of consideration is electricity. All electronic devices operate by electricity and in its absence, the internet is likely to not exist. Another breakthrough that I want to mention is medical discoveries such as medicine and vaccine. The medicine enables doctors to save countless patients and vaccination protects children from not only fatal illness but also complications of vaccine-preventable diseases.
In conclusion, the internet gives us a variety of benefits, and yet other discoveries that are equally important. Each invention is significant in its own way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the greatest'.
Suggestion: of the greatest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34016393443 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06162628285 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4129336151 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4375 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182671536563 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550553410158 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540852386501 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112847029958 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884328919969 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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