Some people believe that subjects such as art, music, drama and creative writing have a bright future.Therefore, schools should spend more time teaching these subjects.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Schools are much necessary to make the base of the student strong and children learn a number of subjects at school.There are some individuals who feel that art and creative subjects should be more focused rather than other subjects.Personally,I disagree with this point of view because others subjects are equally important.
There are many reasons behind it, why some opine that creative subjects play crucial role in terms of future.The main reason is, these are considered to be co-curricular subjects and students tend too much interest in it.To cite an example, every year many reality shows like dance, music are organised by almost every nation.With help of these subjects pupils may become excellent drama artist, singer and choerographer.In term of economy, Artists and talented people also pay their contribution of per income of the country.Celebrity like Amitabh bachan who is worldwide famous, charge high amount of money through his acting.It is a win-win situation for both actor and government.If pupils do study related to art and drama, they will also gain name and fame not for them but also for nation.
Nevertheless, l belive that other academic subjects are also as essential as creative.Over the past few years, academic subjects such as Mathematics, Science, English are not only compulsory for students but also have better career prospects. Moreover, due to the advancement of the technology, each and every work done by computer.In the modern era, knowledge of latest gadgets may help to find well-settled and white coller job, and one can get a handsome salary through it. As a result, it will significant decision that more and more focus should be paid on such subjects.
To conclude, in order to gain better opportunities in future career, art and creative subjects have become important subjects in school curriculum, I consider that equal importance should be given to academic subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25974025974 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98732882294 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.416961954 49.4020404114 452% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.0 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247815745183 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119815829865 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698262597708 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152419585027 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439772442307 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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