You have received a letter from your university of Albion demanding a reason for your absence
from an exam. You were ill that day, but failed to submit the evidence. Write a letter to the
Examinations Committee explaining your situation. You should include:
– Apologies for the situation
– Identification for yourself (Name, Student Number, Case Number)
– An explanation of what had happened and any possible evidence you may have
– Possible resolutions to consider.
Respected Sir,
Based on letter which I got from my university . please accept my apology for my absence on my exams day.
my name is Musa. I am student of six semester studying BS electrical engineering. my registration number is SP09.my exams was planned on February 5, 2019. On this day I felt swear headache in the morning while I was about to come university . Immediately I went to hospital and admitted in Emergency ward. after 3 hours they released me from there and moved to X-ray room for my City scan . after complete all my tests they told cause of headache was empty stomach and advised me to take bed rest for 1 week.
please find attached my admission receipt along with my scan report . It is requested to allow me to appear again in exams next month badge
Appreciate your kind understanding and support .
Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...on letter which I got from my university . please accept my apology for my absence...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...letter which I got from my university . please accept my apology for my absence on my ...
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Suggestion: My
...gy for my absence on my exams day. my name is Musa. I am student of six semes...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'semester' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'semesters'.
Suggestion: semesters
... my name is Musa. I am student of six semester studying BS electrical engineering. my ...
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Suggestion: My
...ter studying BS electrical engineering. my registration number is SP09.my exams wa...
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Suggestion: .
...ing while I was about to come university . Immediately I went to hospital and admi...
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Suggestion: After
...ospital and admitted in Emergency ward. after 3 hours they released me from there and...
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Suggestion: .
...and moved to X-ray room for my City scan . after complete all my tests they told c...
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Suggestion: After
... moved to X-ray room for my City scan . after complete all my tests they told cause o...
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Suggestion: Please
...ed me to take bed rest for 1 week. please find attached my admission receipt alon...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ission receipt along with my scan report . It is requested to allow me to appear a...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iate your kind understanding and support . Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80272108844 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63526058255 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707482993197 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8217466522 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1818181818 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3636363636 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 4.34317383033 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933130082652 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357208786688 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368613069086 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705918862869 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040328957178 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.