You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Ask for some suggestions for what to do
Find out if there are any local events happening at the time
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter for inform you about my journey planning to Los Vegas at next month for a seven days of vocation. In this regard, I request to provide me with some important information about my itinerary.
In this travel, my best friend will accompany me and we will stay in Hilton Hotel. It is a great opportunity for us to benefit from enjoyable and memorized journey. I seek your valuable advice on the places we can visit and the activities we can do. We are going to visit the oldest museum in the north of the city. In addition, my friend also is very keen to go to beaches. As you know we find it difficult to recognize best and secure beaches in the unknown city. Actually, if the situation will be suitable, we would interest to attend in sport events. With regards to this, a brief information about the events that held in this city, certainly, helps us to decide that participate in which one. At the end, if you have any suggestion that it gives us a better journey, we would appreciate you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Mansoureh Sheikh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter for inform you ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55392156863 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52455739533 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6773676511 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4615384615 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200754947949 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648235779478 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746188792612 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14143753083 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741039775384 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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