some people believe that there will be reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is a positive or negative development ?
Air travel have been playing a vital role in the field of communicate. It not only saves time but also considered to be the convenient ways to travel worldwide. Few people opine that, there will be a decline in the amount of air transportation in coming times. I am of the opinion that it will lead to an optimistic establishment for mankind. Along with the positive growth, it will also help incline a host of person towards it in the future.
Firstly, the decline in aviation transportation will eventually reduce the fare prices. It should be noted that, many individuals will become fortunate to commute long distances in lower prices as compared to present times. For instance, these days air travel booking fares are exorbitant, due to which youngsters circumvent their dream of travelling by aeroplane. At times, lack of monetary supplies become a hurdle in achieving the goal of tourism. However, this will change the outlook of people and the situation will lure many budget travellers.
Furthermore, more personages will turn into sightseers. This will gradually benefit all the persons globally. Like people will try to cover more distances by paying less, and many people would also get attracted by the mesmourising tourist places all over the planet. As a consequence, they will travel more across the world. This will help broaden their horizon and improve their tourism skills. As a result, people will become more passionate about travelling and visiting new places worldwide.
To conclude, some people believe that, there can be a decrease in the amount of air travel hereafter. I reckon that, it will contribute towards an optimistic evolution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, so, for instance, i reckon, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15018315018 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79262652313 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578754578755 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5030321107 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.1111111111 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303069744719 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946414941616 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581943782598 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194309110439 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303020079928 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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