New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:
explain that they are preventing you from studying well
suggest what they can do to improve the situation
tell them when you will have completed your studies
Dear Sir,
Unfortunately, I never found time to introduce myself since you have moved in as I have been busy preparing for my university exams. Anyway, I live in the flat directly behind yours and we share a common wall.
Over last two days I am being disturbed during the course of my studies due to loud music that is being played in your flat quite late at night.
Honestly speaking this is hampering my concentration and I am unable to study. Can I request you to please turn down the volume or if you could refrain from playing the music after about 10pm? My exams will be finished on 29th of this month and I would certainly not mind a slightly louder volume after that date.
I hope you don’t mind my asking this of you, and please accept my apologies for any inconvenience being caused. I look forward to meeting you personaly once I am done with my exams.
Regards,
Cyril
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-25 | astrlw@hotmail.com | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...Over last two days I am being disturbed during the course of my studies due to loud music that is be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, honestly, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51533742331 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46854577496 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0299030659 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170835986711 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638200298834 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496587358014 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107255104333 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395531743795 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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