Your friend visited you in your country and stayed in a hotel that you have recommended. Write a letter to the hotel manager about your friend's unsatisfactory stay. In you letter :
1) Tell about your friend.
2) Describe the problem.
3) Suggest some improvement.
Dear Hotel Manager,
The purpose of this letter is to apprise about the unsatisfactory services of your hotel. However, my friend John visited Perth last week for business matters and stayed in your hotel upon my recommendation. In this duration, various problems incurred produced negative feedback.
Firstly, the food prices were extremely high compared to market prices. Secondly, the furniture installed in your rooms producing noises incurs disturbance in sleep. Finally, the shower facility for hot water never works even though the hot water switch was turned on.
Furthermore, the blue-collar staff was unresponsive when making a complaint against services or amenities. In addition to this, they intend to procrastinate while delivering food to generate more tips. However, in my suggestion, you must investigate hotel rooms and installed amenities or services personally and teach a lesson to your staff for such behaviour.
I hope to hear from you soon concerning the reasons behind poorly organised rooms.
Yours faithfully,
Moses Smit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6375 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88303225788 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7810180855 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281167886392 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893080556599 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967220920558 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129718671014 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110230332947 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.84 8.71597938144 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.