write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you, what presents your family would like. Write:
Who your family consist of
What kind of presents each member would like
How you feel about your friend coming to visit
Dear Kiranmyee,
How are you? I hope your doing good .In this letter I will provide about what gifts my family members like and I am feeling about your visit to my place.
In my family as you Know there were totally 5 people . One is my dad and my mom , my granny and my naani and myself. Your Uncle and Aunt were modern where as granny and naani were old fashioned.
my dad likes a blue colour suit with a white shirt inside and a combination phant with tie knot and matching shoes ,And mom likes a kurtha pyjama which is simple but little designed on hands . my two grandmaa's like a cotton saree.
I am soo happy because of your visit to my home . I will be taking you to dinner near my home and will be sharing our memories I extremely . waiting for your visit
I think you will be happy by reading this letter. waiting for you .
Yours Lovingly
N.Balu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mily members like and I am feeling about your visit to my place. ...
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...ally 5 people . One is my dad and my mom , my granny and my naani and myself. Your...
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...myself. Your Uncle and Aunt were modern where as granny and naani were old fashioned. ...
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...n phant with tie knot and matching shoes ,And mom likes a kurtha pyjama which is ...
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... is simple but little designed on hands . my two grandmaas like a cotton saree....
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...o happy because of your visit to my home . I will be taking you to dinner near my ...
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...will be sharing our memories I extremely . waiting for your visit ...
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Suggestion: Waiting
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...remely . waiting for your visit I think you will be happy by reading thi...
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Suggestion: Waiting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51219512195 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08918785234 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1496439458 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6666666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 2.54639175258 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245343996614 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110770645434 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806801877079 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150754123709 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101926602009 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.