Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree?
diet has been most controversial issue as more and more people tend to care about healthy life. because there are various factors which help achieving well-being such as balanced diet, excercise and enough sleep, some people argue that diet cannot be considered the most crucial factor. In fact, I claim the balanced diet the most important, and the following essay will discuss the reason.
To begin with, it is true that continuous and repetitive work out have positive impacts on body. Gaining considerable amount of muscle and losing unnecessary fat are the common examples. Not only for excercise, but taking enough amount of sleep also support body to keep a good condition. According to recent research, when people sleep less than 6 hours, there is high possibility of getting various illness in the future. As the examples show, excercise and sleeping difinitely affect to human body.
However, that does not mean forementioned factors are the most serious ones because diet affects human body within the shortest time among other factors. human body cannot maintain the healthy status without proper nutritions. For instance, King diet was famous in South-Korea. it allows people to eat only meat; any other ingredients are prohibited. At the beginning, people experienced losing weight within two weeks, but they soon realized they were tired easily and got more irritation compared to before.
when people intake unbalanced ingredients, they experience the side-effects pretty soon unlike excercising and sleeping.
To sum up, other factors are also main options to have better life, but that affect human body in a long term. Since diet show prompt effects, it can be seen as the most serious factor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, in fact, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56893000805 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634057971014 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214484194348 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644978269096 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623997603796 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109116627164 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941839683168 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.