The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts of a survey show the most common merits and demerits of visiting Bowen island according to visitors.
Overall, high cost of living is the primary disadvantage of visiting Bowen Island. In contrast, most of them feel that the local people are very friendly. On the whole, people felt that culture, accommodation, scenery and the people are the primary pros of the Island. On the other hand, bad weather, high cost of living, entertainment and food are major cons of visiting the island.
Forty-two percent of the people said they like the hospitality of the Island. Around one-third of the people who completed the survey said that the scenery of the Island was magnificent. Visitors felt that culture was slightly better than the accommodation at 12% and 11% respectively.
Half of the people who completed the survey agreed that the high cost of living is the primary drawback of the island, followed by a quarter of participants said that the Island has entertainment problems. Subsequently, 15% of the respondents felt that the Island has bad weather. Finally, one-tenth of the participants had food problems on the Island.
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Comments
The circular pie charts…
The circular pie charts depict the information pertaining to the basic banefits as well as drawbacks obtained by a survey that conducted by touristors in Bomen island .
It is manifested from first glimpse that most common feature of distraction is high cost for living in bomen island, half of people do not visit island because of expensive cost. Every one in ten visitors are dissatisfied from the quality of food. A quarter of individuals are distracted owing to poor sources of entertainment. some of visitors dislike the weather conditions of island, 15% travellers are influenced by the weather
Further scrutinizing the chart , most of tourists visit bomen island because they love the company of bomen island natives ,amounting to 42%. The view of bomen island attract 35% travellers to visit it. 12% of visitors are attracted toward the traditions of bomen island. 11% of tourists are impressed by the great means of stay there.
Overall , it is crystal clear that half of visitors are distracted by the cost of Bomen island living whereas most of tourists are attracted by the behavior of island dwellers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, third, in contrast, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12169312169 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85159170707 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486772486772 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7085911083 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173526665883 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762882533659 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948164111619 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147387264702 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124538619345 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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