The level of youth crime increasingly rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons and solutions?
Along with the modernization , an increasing number of young people are turning to crime, which is becoming a grave problem that need to be solved. There are various causes that lead to this pressing problem and a variety of measures can/must be taken by both individuals and authorities to mitigate this alarming issue.
Some factors are attributed to the increasing youth crime rates in the society. One reason is that the lack of love and care from parents in their children ’s formative years, which isolates them from their own family. Due to the globalization of commerce, most parents have to work far war from home, which leaves them little time to take care of their children. Consequently, that isolation makes children more prone to mental disorders, which will change their pattern of behavior, code of conduct in a negative way. Secondly, the advent of different of electric devices such as computer and smart phone is the precursor of criminal activities among the youngsters. Most of teenagers now prefer indulging in video games filled up with gory senses to participating in extra_ curriculum activities with their friends or family. If a person is exposed to a violent environment on a frequent basis, the possibility of them becoming criminals is considerably high.
In response to the problem, both individuals and authorities should take steps immediately. The first solution is that school and authorities should promote crime deterrence programs that help to raise awareness of crime and show students the consequences they have to receive when they commit a crime. On being well equipped with useful information about crimes and its negative effects on life, youngsters are less likely to commit such offences. In regard to individuals, most parents should allocate more time to take care of their children instead of indulging in work, which will promote interaction between family members and create bonds of love and care, which is instrumental in shaping a child's value in the long run. Furthermore, parents and school should try supervise their children’s exposure to TV programmes which will act as a deterrent that prevents teenagers from being exposed to violent environment.
To sump up, the causes of this problem are various and both states and individuals should take action to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24074074074 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82740054791 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55291005291 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2161107071 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.066666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971977198855 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357989401295 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513582174092 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498630075441 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310150164691 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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