The qualities or skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or any other academic institution. Top what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary world an individual has to exhibit a high level of caliber and skills which promote its survival in the fast pace of life. I believe that learning systems emphasis more on the theoretical approach than the practical one, so the expertise required to be victorious cannot be learned from them. Through the course of this essay, I would like to put forth all the points and calculations to justify the same.
Firstly, these days universities are more concerned about the syllabus irrespective of its implementation in the real world. It is important to note that many of their textual contents are even deprived of the current market trends. Many teachings and procedures are already outdated, which is ineffective and inefficient to train youngsters deal with challenging situations in their life. Software programming course, for instance, inculcates just basic know-how about the field which insufficient to become successful. IT company like Wipro trains almost all the newly hired fresh graduates to inculcate programming skills in them.
Moreover, modern-day success requires adaptation attitude which many learn from the competitive corporate environments. Educational system follow standard procedures which are rigid. As a consequence of that, people dependent on an academic education are deprived of mental agility. Successful people like Steve Jobs had acquired various interpersonal skills through the course of time. He had not developed much of these skills from his university and school, but from his customers and employees.
In conclusion, these days an individual must possess various skills to be triumphant. People adapt and learn inculcate these by overcoming complex practical situations. Therefore, I believe that these skills and abilities cannot be learnt from an educational institution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63799283154 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00576049678 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3081944221 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158912384921 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485471952788 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042875681454 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985419067551 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312938075255 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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