A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued by many that, animals have the same rights as humans and they should not be exploited, while some in the view that, people must use animals for food and also for research work. The writer agree that, the animals should be given equal rights as humans. This essay will discuss both the views.
As humans, animals also have the right to lead a good life on earth. They should not be used for food and research. In the name of research, most of the time animals are being utilized for pharmaceutical research and not for medical purposes. Humans should stop exploiting them and should be provided safe place for breeding and also to take food. Their shelters should not be destroyed, instead, it should be protected. Because people keep some animals only for the purpose of food and business, they do not give proper care of food to them. They should be provided some security to take care of their younger generations. For instance, research found that 60% of special species of animals will be vanished from earth by 2050.
However, it is also said that, animals should be used for food and research. Meet will provide high protein for the body. It will help us to have a balanced diet. In the area of medical research, animals are used. Without them, it is very difficult to identify proper medicine and day by day, diseases are increasing. Finding out the cause and effect is very important for various diseases. For example, rats are being used by United Nations to find out the medicine for a particular type of cancer.
In conclusion, because of the increasing number of diseases, it is very important to find medicines and only with the use of animals we can achieve this. So animals can be utilized for food and research. On the contrary, animals should be given the equal right as humans. But the writer is in the opinion that animals should be given special attention as humans do.
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- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Di 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
... and also for research work. The writer agree that, the animals should be given equal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70029673591 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34288735346 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459940652819 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5953883228 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3181818182 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497283226398 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167826274758 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116013268983 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343303499953 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957244663218 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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