Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- offer to find somewhere to stay
- give advice about what to do
- give information about what clothes to bring
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Samira,
How are you doing? Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.
I got your letter yesterday and am so excited to learn that you will be joining my University. we can now again be together. As of now there is no vacancy in my room but my other roommate is going to shift out once this semester ends. At that time you can shift with me and we can again be the roommates. Till that time I will find some place for you to stay, probably a PG next to my hostel, so that at least we can commute together.
As you will be arriving in last week of this month and winter starts soon make sure you pack enough warm clothes in your bag. Take extra care to stuff more caps and socks as it gets very cold out here and you don't want to wear wet clothes.
Look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Praj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...that you will be joining my University. we can now again be together. As of now th...
^^
Line 11, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s as it gets very cold out here and you dont want to wear wet clothes. Look for...
^^^^
Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... to wear wet clothes. Look forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19512195122 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93160876812 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5413791003 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5454545455 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115795068085 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540275981246 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056157581427 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710210945597 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616095858315 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.2329268293 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 61.2550243902 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 11.4140731707 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.68 8.06136585366 70% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 40.7170731707 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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