The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart depicts the top of ten nations producing and using electricity in the year 2014.
Overall, the amount of electricity produced and consumed in China and the United States were far higher compare with other nations of top ten. Korea was the country that produced and used electricity the least. It is also noticeable that Germany was the only nation consumed more electricity than it generated.
Out of 10 nations, China ranked first with the production and consumption of electricity being just over 5,300 billion KWH. The second largest country producer and consumer was The Unitated States, which was generated 4,099 billion Kwh and consumed 3,866kwh.
Looking at the rest of the countries, we can see that Russia produced and consumed electricity just over 1,000 billion Kwh. It was folloed by Japan and India , with the figures being slightly lower, ranging from 698,8 billion kwh to 936,2 billion kwh. Remarkably, Germany was the nation using electricity more than generating , which was 582,5 billion kwh in consumption and 526,6 billion kwh in production. The lowest nation in consuming and producing electriccity was belong to Korea, which was 449,5 billion kwh and 485,1 billion kwh orderly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27040816327 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58769761783 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8525652599 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.3 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961680301562 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590464030919 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558865272077 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993889992399 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625072822744 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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