some people argue that it is better that a large proportion of young people attend university, others believe that we should encourage them to become car mechanics ,builders .what is your opinion?
A nation of prosperity depends on educated people so it is very significant for every citizen to have access to the right kind of education .however, from my point of view young people attend university is more important than to be a car mechanics, builders.
In many countries, unemployment is extremely high this is because thy do not have any ideas about vocational training program.If they know about car mechanics and builders then they can get a job easily and earn their livelihood even they can support their families financially . moreover, these kind of student can acquire vocational training, as it is easier than university education .therefore, it is lower cost than academic education .moreover, they can be self-employed in their life and they get independent from families.however, there are some students who does not have the financial ability to acquire higher study.in addition, many students do not have mental capability to pursue higher education .sometimes they failed in their semester .which is very expensive for them .in the middle of their study they can not contain tuition fees.
Academic knowledge is very vital for the university student this because they can learn many things from different subjects in their university studying life. it is very essential to get a good score in their oral examination exam. furthermore, university student get more respect than vocational student .moreover, university provide an outstanding environment for read .in addition, they also can learn social behavior, manners,discipline and so on .academic student status is too higher than vocational students .therefore these students are part of a civil society .however, vocational student are always do hard work in the outside .they do not get that much wage compare to university student .
To sum up,in this modern world academic student keep fundamental demand to develop countries stature
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- some people argue that it is better that a large proportion of young people attend university, others believe that we should encourage them to become car mechanics ,builders .what is your opinion? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41528239203 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96561053094 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.379729531 49.4020404114 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.857142857 106.682146367 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0484293533631 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281822983695 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458115551927 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042238689746 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547915138331 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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