Parents of your close friend are coming to your area for a visit. He/she asked you to suggest some places for older people to visit. Write a letter to your friend and include the following:
– Suggest some places his/her parents could visit.
– Recommend a place for them to stay.
– Give some other ideas for their visit.
Dear Amit,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirits. It has been a long time since we talked to each other because personal and professional engagements keep me busy all the time. I am very happy to know that your parents will be visiting Ghaziabad next month.
I would like to mention some beautiful and serene places to visit for your parents. They can not only visit the famous temple Akshardham but also they visit to museum and library in Ghaziabad. I would also suggest a good hotel known as Nataraja hotel which is especially for older people and tourists. It is a very clean and safe place to live in. Apart from that, I would recommend visiting seven wonders of the world and Jantar Mantar in Delhi. There are many other places to visit nearby like Akbar ka Makbara, City forest and many more.
At last, here everything goes as usual. Tell me what is happening in your world. Convey my regards to your parents and hug to Hanu and Ishi.
Your friend
Jai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53296703297 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17662877786 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3757528965 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4615384615 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382495287848 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116942564701 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845567006702 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190783505293 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715642784935 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.